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Writing to explain

26/08/19  

WALT: Explain what my ideal home would look like.

SC:

• I have 3 ideas that connect to the topic. - how it feels, what it looks like, location.
• Each idea is supported with extra information - facts & examples.

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Tue- Te reo

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Thu- Here

Mon- Here

My House

My house will have everything I could ever want. My family, my own room, it would feel nice 

Firstly my house physically would be big with 5 stories, a water slide from the top floor to the bottom,
3 pools, and a bar. 

Secondly, the 1st floor will have a grey carpet and black walls, there will be a pool there. After that the
2nd story would have a red carpet and blue walls, the bar will be there with a pool and A big window. 

Thirdly, all of the rooms will have food dispensers. Inside the last story will have my room with Minecraft
everything an inside pool shaped as a creeper flat screen tv ps4, Xbox 1 and Xbox 360 with all my
favorite games and the softest bed. Also, it would be safe, healthy, clean, and popular It would also
feel like a permanent holiday. I will have a Minecraft car it will look like a minecart My mum will have
here on theatre where she can watch as much Gilmore Girls as she wants. The house will have
wireless internet a VR room and at the roof, it will have a private jet and a big drone for my brother
and my Nana will have a special robot to play her favorite game scrabble.  

Finally, The house would be run by robots. The garage would be in the basement my dad's place to
chill he would have every car from past, present, and future with every tool you could ever need (want).
The location would be on a hill in a forest with a view of a beach there would be lots of fish. We would
have a cruise ship and hot pools for everyone. 

In conclusion, It would feel safe, clean healthy and warm. My family, my own room and a beach
view.

Character description

Character description

Mara is and kind,helpful,and intelligent person she is always trying new ideas and never giving up. Her dark brown eyes are covered by dark, thin rimmed glasses. Her face shows she is passionate about flying but can never get her planes to get 10 feet in the air. She is determined to make a plane fly, her emotions and brilliant mind are powerful, enormous and clear.

My writing

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Green: paragraph 2

red: paragraph 3

The Big day

They day has arrived I have been waiting for this day but wait it hasn’t arrived It’s…still… monday  noooooo. Thank goodness that was only a dream or was it , Is it still monday I looked at the calendar it was saturday than phew I sighed with relief so today I’m going to  stay hoe and relax but my sister had to come in and say “ Neko wake up please” “what” I groaned

“It’s 5:00 in the morning can I go back to sleep” “no” she yelled “shhhhh” said Tyrone “we’re trying to sleep”. “But….”  “ go back to bed now” Mum yelled. I said “ I told you would get us in trouble” “arghh” She said and went to bed. At about 8:30 I woke up and did some jobs around the house and inside the house.

After I finished the jobs I went on my chromebook I just played on it for a while it was fun then we got off them we had dinner and then we asked if we could go back on them our mum said “yes but only an hour ok” “ok” we said.