26/08/19
WALT: Explain what my ideal home would look like.
SC:
- I have 3 ideas that connect to the topic. - how it feels, what it looks like, location.
- Each idea is supported with extra information - facts & examples.
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My House
My house will have everything I could ever want. My family, my own room, it would feel nice
Firstly my house physically would be big with 5 stories, a water slide from the top floor to the bottom,
3 pools, and a bar.
3 pools, and a bar.
Secondly, the 1st floor will have a grey carpet and black walls, there will be a pool there. After that the
2nd story would have a red carpet and blue walls, the bar will be there with a pool and A big window.
2nd story would have a red carpet and blue walls, the bar will be there with a pool and A big window.
Thirdly, all of the rooms will have food dispensers. Inside the last story will have my room with Minecraft
everything an inside pool shaped as a creeper flat screen tv ps4, Xbox 1 and Xbox 360 with all my
favorite games and the softest bed. Also, it would be safe, healthy, clean, and popular It would also
feel like a permanent holiday. I will have a Minecraft car it will look like a minecart My mum will have
here on theatre where she can watch as much Gilmore Girls as she wants. The house will have
wireless internet a VR room and at the roof, it will have a private jet and a big drone for my brother
and my Nana will have a special robot to play her favorite game scrabble.
everything an inside pool shaped as a creeper flat screen tv ps4, Xbox 1 and Xbox 360 with all my
favorite games and the softest bed. Also, it would be safe, healthy, clean, and popular It would also
feel like a permanent holiday. I will have a Minecraft car it will look like a minecart My mum will have
here on theatre where she can watch as much Gilmore Girls as she wants. The house will have
wireless internet a VR room and at the roof, it will have a private jet and a big drone for my brother
and my Nana will have a special robot to play her favorite game scrabble.
Finally, The house would be run by robots. The garage would be in the basement my dad's place to
chill he would have every car from past, present, and future with every tool you could ever need (want).
The location would be on a hill in a forest with a view of a beach there would be lots of fish. We would
have a cruise ship and hot pools for everyone.
chill he would have every car from past, present, and future with every tool you could ever need (want).
The location would be on a hill in a forest with a view of a beach there would be lots of fish. We would
have a cruise ship and hot pools for everyone.
In conclusion, It would feel safe, clean healthy and warm. My family, my own room and a beach
view.
view.
Kia ora Nelo my name is Tawhiri, I’m a student at Paihia School. I really like your ideal house because it sounds like it would be very flash and it would be a mansion. I like how you explained your ideal home because I could really picture the house but I think maybe you could add something about the living room if there is one. I also like minecraft and think that a creeper shaped pool would be awesome. If you could would you actually get a house like this?
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ReplyDeleteHello Neko, I'm Ben from Bay of Islands College. I like all of the things you put in your house especially the virtual reality. I also think it was thoughtful to include your family members like your nana, brother, and your parents. All of the details were interesting and it sounds like you house would be a mean place to live. How much do you think this house and all of the assets would be worth?