Saturday, 4 January 2020

wk 1 dy 2 act 2


1 comment:

  1. Kia ora Neko,

    How are you doing today? I hope you're having a nice week!

    I love your poem! You did so well to find words that both rhyme AND describe what it might be like to be the first person to visit the moon. Did you find it difficult to find words that rhymed, or was it quite easy?

    I also really like how you've laid your poem out and included images to make it more eye-catching - ka pai!

    Keep up the great work :)

    Ngā mihi,
    Tayla

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